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Vombie
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 haiku A co-worker and I were exchanging poems via email about our feelings of the band Duran Duran. She wrote her own poem about Duran Duran that was crude and funny. then I responded with a poem, and so on. She's a huge fan, and I'm not, so it was some really funny stuff going back and forth. Anyway, I got the idea to write some haiku about my hobby, and decided to share this here. no big whoop. If you want to add your own, please do!
I love vinyl toys
From Japan they cost a lot
I’m a fucking dork.
Hey, I’ve lost some weight
My toy collection grows fat
My girlfriend left me
Smooch, kiss, kiss, kiss, smooch
Squeeze, kiss, kiss, look around….lick~!
Another new toy
Duran fan, Toy freak
Who should we shoot first? Let’s see…
That’s easy! Toy freak.
Crack-rock, Weed, Bootleg
DVDs, prostitution
Look! I bought five toys!
Ramen noodles, bread
Peanutbutter and jelly
Ran out of bread. Damn.
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pickleloaf
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Location: durham/chapel hill
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inhale toxic fumes
empty my wallet and cry
oh, what a hobby
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soda pop SMASH
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Location: New Zealand
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gargamel smogun
is the toy that sucked me in
love* you gargamel
*alternatively can be read as fuck, depending
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Gizzy
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good stuff 
Classic haiku btw, has some form of seasonality in it, or alluding to seasons. If you do more, try to work some in there.
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jojo the dog faced boy
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i hunt vinyl, why?
am i going insane? sheesh!!
someone help me please!!
sorry gizzy, no seasonality in mine.......
edit.....
umm....need some coffee.......thanks for the heads up.
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Joe
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jojo: think you're missing a syllable in the first line.
Behind the bright screen
In the darkness of my room
I hunt for Kaiju
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Gizzy
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hehe it's all good
I'll take a shot at one
As the days grow warmer
and the feverish frenzy of SDCC arrives
my wallet cries out in pain
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Joe
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Lol Gizzy.
5-7-5.
My prey is in sight
I quickly pull the trigger
My wallet has died
Last edited by Joe on Tue Apr 29, 2008 11:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Gizzy
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hehe I try 
edit: Great stuff wht and akum
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akum6n
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Location: Shima
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My eyes burn in pain
The sound of frantic clicking
Morning victory
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pickleloaf
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Location: durham/chapel hill
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sweet yet toxic breeze
opening the detolf door
andre the giant
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straightoutta..LOKASH
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Plastic in wallet
Vinyl on my shelves
Tears in my eyes
Petroleum toy
Made from earths fossil fuel
Al Gore hates you
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pickleloaf
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straightoutta..LOKASH wrote: Petroleum toy
Made from earths fossil fuel
Al Gore hates you haha 5-6-4
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straightoutta..LOKASH
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Dammit!
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Vombie
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pickleloaf wrote: straightoutta..LOKASH wrote: Petroleum toy
Made from earths fossil fuel
Al Gore hates you haha 5-6-4 LOKASH, add "the"
that's a good one!
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straightoutta..LOKASH
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Petroleum toy
Made from our earths fossil fuel
Al Gore must hate you
Hows that?
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pickleloaf
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straightoutta..LOKASH wrote: Petroleum toy
Made from our earths fossil fuel
Al Gore must hate you
Hows that? nice!
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Vombie
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you're right. my bad.
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kaiwi
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Anticipation
Key turns lock, I peek inside
Yes, a small brown slip!
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